I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging
· Write in the third person
· Use capital letters and full stops.
Her legs started to wobble, her heart pounded faster than a cheater. She heard strange noises in the distance then everything went silent. She imagined what might be lurking through the dark woods……
He smashed the door right open, his eyes were looking evil. He had a big frown. His face was red like he was going to burst in flames. He clenched his hands into a fist. He started to imagined what he would do to his little brother……
Can you find out what emotions I was writing about?