Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show Don't Tell...

Today room 5 learnt how to do show don't tell, here are mine...

WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking

I will leave the audience hanging

REMEMBER TO
·                     Write in the third person
·                     Use capital letters and full stops.

Her legs started to wobble, her heart pounded faster than a cheater. She heard strange noises in the distance then everything went silent. She imagined what might be lurking through the dark woods……

He smashed the door right open, his eyes were looking evil. He had a big frown. His face was red like he was going to burst in flames. He clenched his hands into a fist. He started to imagined what he would do to his little brother……

Can you find out what emotions I was writing about?


Tuesday, 2 September 2014

What Animal Would I be...

If I could be any animal in the world it would probably be the Vampire bat. I would want to be a Vampire bat because if a predator trys to eat me I could just fly away (that is if the predator can't fly) their food is really easy to find, blood its nearly every where, there light, stealthily, their nocturnal and when the bat sucks blood from an animal or person they can suck their blood for 30min with out the animal or person waking up and it doesn't hurt but the main reason was that the bat represents Batman (and hes my favorite super hero).